Leave one phrase
The line gives customers words they can repeat later.
Branding guide · Taglines
A tagline can make a promise easier to repeat. It cannot rescue weak proof, unclear positioning, or a product people do not believe.
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Pick one main job. A line that tries to do everything becomes too broad to remember.
The line gives customers words they can repeat later.
The line makes the useful outcome easier to understand.
The line says how the brand acts, decides, or helps.
The line gives a launch or push a simple shared handle.
Use a line when the system underneath it is clear enough to support the sentence.
A bad line usually asks language to cover a business problem.
The promise becomes a public receipt for a weak product, policy, or service.
The words sound polished but do not help people remember this brand.
The buyer still has to work out the offer after reading the slogan.
A launch sentence remains on the site long after the reason disappeared.
The line sounds meaningful only to people who sat through the strategy work.
A slogan that functions as a source cue may need trademark review.